C2/C2D Personal Perspective Essay Sample 4
Marriage is important to many people. This is because when you get married you spend all your time with your husband or wife. I think people should get married because there are many benefits.

 

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Clear opinion of the topic.
 
 

First, when you get married you are never lonely. For example, my parents always eat dinner together and they are happy. But, I eat lunch at school by myself and feel sad every day. I hate eating alone. When I grow up I want to get married so I always have someone to be with.

Development: Support 1

Detailed reason supported with personal experience.

  • Specific details
  • Emotions/Feelings
  • Outcome/Lesson
  • Relevance

 

Next, married people can save more money. Two people can save more money by living together. For example, my dad lived in a small apartment when he was in his 20s. But, when he married my mom, they lived together for a few years and saved enough money to buy a big house.

In conclusion, marriage offers many good things for people.

Development: Support 2

Detailed reason supported with personal experience.

  • Specific details
  • Emotions/Feelings
  • Outcome/Lesson
  • Relevance

 

 
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23 thoughts on “C2/C2D Personal Perspective Essay Sample 4

  1. 아 시험 잘 보고 싶다

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  2. Very good! Marriage is important but you have to think many many and many! You have to meet good people^^

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  3. Hi

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  4. Thank you. Marriage… When you willl marry?

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    • Hi Jennifer! I hope soon :)

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  5. Hello

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  6. 오빤 강남스타일

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  7. HelloठंठफठंओनदठजजंपडदडछਠਠੜਕਠHelloठंठफठंओनदठजजंपडदडछਛਭਂਛਢੰਛਭ

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  8. Hi

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  9. Hi

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    • ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋhello

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      • 잘 봤다

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    • ㅋㅋㅋㅋ hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

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      • Hello. EVERYONE !!!!!

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  10. ㅋㅋ

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    • ??

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    • いつもならまだ眠いしている。(真顔での評判をもっと見るのは、私が一番可愛

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      • !!

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  11. .

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  12. Thank you for great example,!!

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  13. Thank you !

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    • Good

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      • Hello?

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