C2/C2D Personal Perspective Essay Sample 6
Recently, MERS has spread and been in the news a lot. Many people have gotten sick and many things in Korea have been crazy. I think that MERS people should be more careful and learn about hygiene so that it does not spread.

 

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Clear opinion of the topic.
 
 

First, many schools had to close because of MERS spreading. My school was afraid of MERS spreading to the students so the school closed. However, it was not good for me because I could not even go outside and play! Also, the school closing means I have to go to school during vacation time. If the people with MERS were more careful then I would not have such problems.

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Detailed reason supported with personal experience.

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Next, many people have to wear masks in Korea because they do not want to get MERS. If the first person who had MERS learned to cover their mouth when coughing in places with a lot of people, then it might not have spread as far. But now, a lot of people have to buy masks and wear them. I hate how uncomfortable and hot they make me feel.

Development: Support 2

Detailed reason supported with personal experience.

  • Specific details
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Finally, many stores closed down because of MERS. Once, I had to go to the store to buy some food for dinner. However, when I got there a sign on the door said that it was closed because of MERS. I had to walk around to many different stores to find one that was open. This was very frustrating and tiring. The people with MERS should stay inside so that businesses don’t close down.

For these reasons, people with MERS should be more careful.

Development: Support 3

Detailed reason supported with personal experience.

  • Specific details
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  • Outcome/Lesson
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7 thoughts on “C2/C2D Personal Perspective Essay Sample 6

  1. good

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  2. I already knew all of the information in the passage…
    It’s so boring…I miss my bed.

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  3. I think this is a great essay on MERS…especially for it being a hot topic this year in Korea

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  5. Perfect!!!

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  6. finish!!

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